今天小编给大家分享一篇：雅思写作抽象类话题高分范文案例分析

高分范文

Almost everyone wants to pursue a life path strewn with roses,whereas the truth is that the real life is always full of twists and turns.This,accordingly,provokes the endless debate on how to face difficulties of

our lives.

Some shiftless people choose to adapt themselves to the tough situations of their lives rather than struggle,naively believing that misfortunes might somehow disappear or they are able to successfully adjust themselves to difficulties that others are trying their best to go through.once they get a job without any satisfaction,for example,they do have the illusion that one day they can suddenly become extremely passionate about the

job and all the dissatisfaction they used to have will be totally gone.Obviously,they ought to walk out of the

fairy tale world they mistakenly believe they are living in but actually does not exist at all.

On the other hand,people with a positive outlook on life are more likely to actively forge ahead with the

hardship they are facing.In most cases,they make every effort to overcome the barrier between real life and

the life they dream of.In a financial predicament,for instance,they unquestionably exert themselves to the

utmost to borrow money from their friends,apply for loan from banks,or work unbelievably hard to make

enough money.Beyond all doubt,they will remove their obstacles step by step.On top of this,what they can

learn and accumulate from this process can be definitely seen as the priceless life experiences.

In conclusion,we should certainly be the masters of our own destiny but not give up ourselves or be defeated

by any difficulty of life.

一参考泽文

几乎每个人都想要追求安逸的生活,然而事实是真实的人生总是充满了各种挫折。这也就引起了一场永无止境的讨论:我们应该如何面对生活中的艰难困苦。

不求上进的人选择去适应这些生活中的困境而不是为之奋斗。 他们天真地认为这些不幸可能会莫名地消失,或者认为他们最终可以成功地调整自己来适应这些别人需要竭尽全力才能克服的困难。例如,虽然他们非常不满意自己的工作,但他们仍然心存幻想,某一天他们可以突然变得对这个工

作充满激情,那时对工作所有的不满都将烟消云微.显然,他们应该走出那个自以为生活在其中却 根本不存在的童话世界。

另一方面,拥有积极人生观的人们更愿意在他们面临困境砥砺前行.在大多数情况下

他们会尽其所能去克服横亘于现实和他们梦想生活之间的障得.例如,一旦处于财务危机中,毋庸置疑他们会使出浑身解数去向友人借钱,向银行申请贷款,或极其努力地工作赚取足够的钱毫无疑问,他们会一步步地摆脱困境。除此之外,在这个过程中他们所字习和积累的东西绝对可以被视为宝贵的人生经验。

总之,我们当然应该成为主宰自己命运的主人,而不是自我放弃或者被生活困境所击败。

结构分析与点评

由于题目是双边讨论”类题目,因此本文采用较为常见的四段式结构。开头段介绍背景并点明题目。主一段和主二段分别就题干中的两个观点展开论述,并且通过分析这两个观点,笔者的

倾向性也一目了然地表现了出来。结尾段通过主段的论述自然而然地得出结论,即笔者自身的立场回应題干主体。

亮点词汇与表达

life path 生命之路,生命之旅

twists and turns迂回曲折

provoke.引起

shiftless adj.不求上进的

misfortune n.不幸

illusion n.错觉,幻觉

dissatisfaction n.不满

mistakenly错误地,曲解地

forge ahead 砥砺前行

predicament n.困境,窘况

exert oneself to the utmost 尽某人最大努力 beyond all doubt毫无疑问

亮点语句

1.Some shiftless people choose to adapt themselves to the tough situations of their lives rather th

struggle,naively believing that misfortunes might somehow disappear or they are able to successiun

adjust themselves to difficulties that others are trying their best to go through.(第二段第一句)

不求上进的人选择去适应这些生活中的困境而不是为之奋斗他们天真地认为这些不幸可能会莫名地消失,或者认为他们最终可以成功地调整自己来适应这些别人需要竭尽全力才能克服的困难

2.Obviously,they ought to walk out of the fairy tale world they mistakenly believe they are living actually does not exist at all.(第二段最后一句)

显然,他们应该走出那个自以为生活在其中却根本不存在的童话世界。

3.On the other hand,people with a positive outlook on life are more likely to actively forge ahead with the hardship they are facing.(第三段第一句)

另一方面,拥有积极人生观的人们更愿意在他们面临困境时砥砺前行。

4.In conclusion,we should certainly be the masters of our own destiny but not give up ourselves or be defeated by any difficulty of life.(最后一段)

总之,我们当然应该成为主宰自己命运的主人,而不是自我放弃或者被生活的困境所击败。

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